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Even in my dreams, dear, I am sick of your
ghost.

You haunt me when my eyes close,
amidst the candy cane trees my mind
makes up; You stroll along the sea grass
        
laughing, like a hyena. You grab my hand

And I have to remind myself: this is only a dream,
a dream! I scream, I scream. Your laughter is thick
as honey now. I can hear the bees.

They swarm, and I think suddenly that I can
feel pain in dreams, can you? You are silent,
I am under the buzzing wings, floating

Away from you. Your ghost is farther away
than ever, now. Sometimes

I wake: a bee stuck in my throat.
         
©2009 ~ohfever
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:iconalecbell:
The theatre of the mind?

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconlacili:
Absolutely intoxicating.

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"SHUT UP AND SMILE!!"
Rest in peace, Alex. I love you for now and for forever.
:icondreamscape-painter:
The ending is very powerful, but I think this:

And I have to remind myself: this is only a dream,
a dream! I scream, I scream. Your laughter is thick
as honey now. I can hear the bees.


is my favorite. Lovely.

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Positive Affirmation: [link]
The Crown's Jewel :heart:
:iconthetaoofchaos:
wonderfully lyrical

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The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconlazybutt:
Delightful read! :)

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:iconchelsea-chic:
Powerful.
She is a recurring character in your poetry, isn't she? She reminds me almost exactly of someone from my childhood. I have written about her over and over again, but your poetry is so much more. I'm glad for it.
Thank you.

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Hi, I'm Emily.
:iconohfever:
yes, she haunts me from my past,
I am glad I help. I would love to read the ones about your ghost girl..

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Do you still believe in stars?

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:iconohfever:
thank you :hug:

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