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I could. by ~ohfever:iconohfever:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


I could have been a painter,
my body bare, covering canvasses
with my pain, spreading it around
in different shades. I

Would have
spent hours with my mind
open to everything
& my eyes closed
to make fragments
of myself and offer them as
painted delicacies.

Instead i am a writer;
my whole world collapsed
in hours and i wrote
about it while sweat
poured from my body

And I still had
so much to say and no

words to say it
with.
©2007-2010 ~ohfever
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Author's Comments



An old poem I decided to give a home to.
Thanks for reading. :heart:

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=thewesternwoods Feb 10, 2007, 2:02:09 PM
I've been waiting to see something from you, so this was nice to read. Beautiful as always, and I can of course relate to what you're saying.

Great work. :)

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'Forever we'll be crucified to a dream' HIM
:iconthewesternwoods:
=thewesternwoods Feb 10, 2007, 2:10:28 PM
I've been waiting to see something from you, so this was nice to read. Beautiful as always, and I can of course relate to what you're saying.

Great work. :)

--
'Forever we'll be crucified to a dream' HIM
:iconaxisrose:
~axisrose Feb 10, 2007, 4:35:40 PM
i like.
it doesnt evoke much but its very well rounded..

please visit my page :)

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rotting hill zoo
:iconohfever:
~ohfever Feb 10, 2007, 4:57:06 PM
i think i might move it to scraps and add something else

thank you though :)

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Do you still believe in stars?

*tangledseaweed ~ art / photos
:iconohfever:
~ohfever Feb 10, 2007, 4:57:15 PM
hmm, thanks, i think. lol

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Do you still believe in stars?

*tangledseaweed ~ art / photos
:icontoadsmoothy2:
*Toadsmoothy2 Feb 10, 2007, 5:47:52 PM
wow...i can relate. beautiful :clap:

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Life is just waiting around for the next disaster. The only consolation is, one of these times it'll be fatal.
:icontoadsmoothy2:
*Toadsmoothy2 Feb 10, 2007, 5:48:47 PM
wow...i can relate. beautiful :clap:

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Life is just waiting around for the next disaster. The only consolation is, one of these times it'll be fatal.
:iconlovespoon:
*Lovespoon Feb 10, 2007, 5:56:31 PM
Thanks for posting. Nice contrast.

:teddy:

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"Women may fake orgasms, but men fake entire relationships."

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~sweetandrogyny Feb 11, 2007, 2:25:25 AM
it's lovely. but you can tell it's one of your old ones. your style has evolved so beautifully.
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~ohhsofragile Feb 11, 2007, 8:05:32 AM
i think that this is a beautiful piece. weather old or new, you're an awesome writer. (who should be published btw) i wish i had half your talent and beauty.:blowkiss:
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